1. In the gloom I could only just discern the outline of a building.
    在黑暗中我只能依稀分辨出一座建筑物的轮廓来.

2. In the breaking and remaking, in the timing, interweaving, beginning afresh, the writer comes to discern things in his material which were not consciously in his mind when he began.
    动笔前先列什么提纲。作家在剪裁修改、构思时间、穿插情节、以至从头重写的过程中，会领悟到素材中很多东西是他刚动笔时所未意识到的。